Fra Angelico is interrupted during Lauds to receive a mysterious child. He is then taken on a midnight Christmas visit to rescue a lost, little girl.
We often introduce little vampires into our text that sap the life, weaken the nouns and cause our verbs to sag to their knees. Here’s some writing help!
Ready to crash from exhaustion, Fra Angelico’s guardian angel takes him on a mission to Mt. Carmel, then to the Forges in Angelium, and lastly to Aylesford.
A lot of beginning writers fall into a ‘mind trap’. Literally; they spend way too much time in their head. Some writing help to keep the scene moving.
Interrupted in his chores, Fra Angelico returns to Roman Israel for healing waters, and then flies to Capernaum in time to heal the centurion’s servant.